结构是你作文中最重要的部分。评分者会扫描你文章中的结构,并判断是否具有标准的格式和标准的逻辑过渡。
作文中常用套句
下文中出现的A,B,“…"(某事物),“sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换。
开头:
When it comes to …, some think …
There is a public debate today that …
A is a common way of …, but is it a wise one?
Recently the problem has been broughtsintosfocus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that…
It is time we explore the truth of …
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
… but that is the only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is …
A is but one of the many effects. Another is …
Besides, other reasons are…
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that…
Just imagine what would be like if…
It is reasonable to expect…
It is not surprising that…
举普通例子:
For example(instance),…
… such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is…
A particular example for this is…
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said …
“Knowledge is power", such is the remark of …
“……". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise…).
“……". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare
…, such dilemma we often meet in daily life
…, the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for …
Why … , for one thing,…
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves …
The first reason can be obliviously seen.
Most people would agree that…
Some people may neglect that in fact …
Others suggest that…
Part of the explanation is …
进行对比:
The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of…
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage …
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe … , but it suffers from the disadvantage that…
承上启下:
To understand the truth of …, it is also important to see…
A study of … will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as…
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
From what has been discussed above, we may safely drawthe conclusion that …
In summary, it is wiser …
In short…
连接词的妙
用连词例子:
(1)表示时间与频率的词汇:in general, every, some, after, on the whole, usually, most, at other times, in most cases, frequently, main, finally, as a rule, rarely, before, meanwhile.
(2)表示附加的词:additionally, as well as, just as, again, along with, also, further, furthermore, likewise, in the same manner, in the same way, in addition to,
(3)引出例子:for example, namely, for instance, as an example, that is
(4)表示转折:although, instead, rather than, but, nevertheless, though, however, on the other hand, otherwise
(5)得出结论:all in all, in consequence, in brief, as a result, the point is, in conclusion, therefore, hence, in sum.
模板
(1)介绍性段落(2-4句)确保使文章的开头段落简洁,有效和具有说服力。以下是介绍性段落应该具备的内容:
简单解析作文题目。
表现出你已经理解了这个题目(比如,通过分别阐述双方观点)。
在该问题上表明你的观点立场(但还不到需要细节的时候)。
开头段落较简单的模板(2句):
a) Whether______ depends on______b) (插入你的观点),______.
(2)第一个主体段落(3-5句)
开始阐述你最重要的理由,同时举一两个例子支持来佐证:
a) The chief reason for my view is______.
b) For example,______.
c) Moreover, ______.
d) Finally,______.
(3)第二个主体段落
用第二个理由来展开你的观点。至少引用一个例子来让明你的理由。
表述你的第二个理由(只要一个)。
提供推理或者证据支持这个理由。
以下是第二个主体段落的模板样本:
a) Another reason for my view is______.
b) Specifically,______.
c) The result is,______.
(4)第三个主体段落(可有可无)在这一段,你可以提出一个相反的观点或者推理,然后反驳它进一步加强你的观点,这就是以退为进的战术。
承认可能存在着一个不同的观点或者相反的推理。
为这个不同的观点提供推理或者例子。
反驳它。
以下是该段的模板:
a) Some might argue, ______.
b) Yet,______.
c) others might cite,______.
d) However, ______.
(5)结论性段落在这一段,你用1-3句话对你的观点作一个总结:
阐述你的观点。
简单地重述你在主体段落里的理由。
在结论段落中,你不要提供新的信息或者理由,这里不是推出新结论的地方。
a) In sum, I concur that ______.
b) However,______; on the whole______.
介绍
结构是你作文中最重要的部分。评分者会扫描你文章中的结构,并判断是否具有标准的格式和标准的逻辑过渡。
开头/结论这两部分有效地提示了文章的结构和思路轨迹。
段落数:为了取悦评分者,你的作文应该有4至5段:开头,结论和三个“主体”段。每个段落大概包含2-5句(整篇文章300-400字)。
关于模板
这里的模板只起指导作用,你不一定严格照搬。为了迎合你的推理需要,你可以作一些修改。
以上每段的句子个数只是参考,具体要看你的文章内容多少而定。我们在模板中所用的过渡语句简洁单一,你可以借鉴使用。当然,在模板中“填空”时,你也可以自己的思路灵活变通。
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