做的一些笔记,贴出来,希望和大家讨论,每天写一些,不是很多,另外这些东西也post在我的主页(kzeng.nease.net)上了,因为在连我ftp比连GTER更容易些,所以那里的更新更快。让我们发扬GTer精神打倒TSE,另外希望斑竹多给些建议,谢谢先:)
1)语言功能,在说以前判断到底是在考什么,如果是recommendation,一定要说出关键词,不要假定rater知道你在说什么!
2)重要的是appropriate,simple一点没有什么问题。Making two points也不会多得分的,简单些不容易出错。
3) 如果时间稍多,给出两个reason,实在不行也无所谓,一个就一个,不要贪多,否则无论是构思还是表述时间都会不够的。一般给出reason的模式是:previewing reason,providing details 然后concluding。
4) 一个关于推荐(recommendation)的范例: I think you really ought to go to the ice cream store. I know you’ll enjoy it for three important reasons! First of all, they have a variety of flavors, over 100 different kinds! Second, all their ice cream is made with natural ingredients. No preservatives or artificial flavors are used. But best of all are the low prices! I know you like a choice of healthy, inexpensive treats, so the ice cream store is definitely a place you’ll want to go! 感叹号表示你要充满激情的说,因为是让你进行role-play,激情使你的recommendation更加convincing,并且激情可以让你听起来不那么紧张。To be enthusiasm! 这段话的语气比较informal。 提供原因仍然使上边的三步曲,previewing reason部分有两句话,第一句话表明推荐(function)第二句话很重要。美国的listeners are expected to be guided in this way. 这会使你更加understandable。
5) 我们仍然需要激情,激情将带来needed的innotation
6) 谈最喜欢的一个video的例子: One of my favorite videos is It’s A Wonderful Life! There are two main reasons why I like this fascinating story. The first reason I like this video is because it shows how the decisions and actions of one person’s life can affect many other lives! For example, when George was a boy he jumped into the broken ice of a pond to save his younger brother. George’s brother later grew up to be a pilot in the Air Force and saved the lives of many American soldiers. If George hadn’t saved his brother when he was a kid, his brother couldn’t have saved those soldiers! The other reason I like this video is because it’s show on TV every year at Christmas time. It has become a tradition to watch it every year.
if you haven’t seen It’s A Wonderful Life! I highly recommend it. It’s an interesting story that shows us how closely our lives are tied to each other’s. Who knows, you may start your own tradition of watching it every year! 在叙述故事的时候要注意避免使用歧异的代词,因此宁可多用些名字而不是he 或是she,这样才能有效的交流。在作比较的时候重读。一些有用的表示激情的句子:fascinating story,I highly recommend it……
作者:kzeng
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