吴建业老师的学生蔡迎博(STACY)同学在7月24号考试中取得了写作8分的好成绩。下面是她的8分范文，供各位同学学习借鉴。感谢STACY的无私奉献！——

我是广外的一名的学生，这次writing有8分的成绩还真的要感谢吴建业老师。相信很多鸭友们都听说过吴老师的套句，有些同学很不屑，但现在我想真诚地告诉大家，适当用好吴老师的套句对于考试是很有用的， 因为这些句子本来就是英语中的好句子。对于写作，我的体会是按照吴老师的方法，自己写时多注意结构清晰，表达正确，有理有据，做好这几点应该会有满意的成绩。下面我大概回忆7月24号考试时所写的作文，希望对大家有点帮助！（其实写得也很朴实，没什么特别的，但我尽量按照以上的几点去写。）蔡迎博

Topic: The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you aggress or disagree?

Prompted by some incidents of television and film inspired crimes, the issue of whether the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television has been a contentious discussion. Views on the topic vary greatly.

Advocates claim that the practice of controlling the amount of violence in mass media is a brazen violation of the people’s basic right to know the truth of the world. For example, some films contain some violence, but they reflect the things happened around us. Rather than producing negative effects on audience, to some extent, these films educate them. Furthermore, violence in films or on television programs cultivates people’s senses of crisis and responsibility, which makes ordinary people and police work better for public security. Consequently, it is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in our society.

However, opponents argue that violence in films and on television is detrimental to audience’s psychology. Taking fantasy for reality, people become aggressive and eccentric. They believe things can be solved by violence. In addition, violence has negative impacts on the stability of society. Research findings reveal that 60 percent of crimes are committed by teenagers after watching films or television which had a large amount of violence. Teenagers are so vulnerable and immature that they cannot judge whether the activities performed in mass media are right or not. As an illustration, a boy killed his younger sister in Australia because he imitated the violent scenes from television programs.

In my opinion, the disadvantages of controlling the amount of violence in media outweigh the advantages. But I believe the government should label how much violence the programs contain on the screens, and parents and teachers have responsibility to guide their children and help them to distinguish right from wrong when they watch violent programs.